hmm
I like it, but it needs some work. I think the song lacks some power, for example, after your slowing down and then building up at right about 3 minutes (which is awesome by the way), I think you could have a stronger drum part come in. It feels like the buildup sets you up for something huge, but it just goes back to the melody without a real backbone to it. Dunno if that makes sense. I guess really what I'm asking for is a drumpart with more of a kick, I think the song lacked in that way. And you should also work on a better ending than what you have, the way it just cuts off isn't too good. But like I said, I really like it all around, its really creative
9 and 5